Wednesday 27 October 2010

A DETECTIVE STORY

In this work, pupils of ICT(Information, Comunication, technology) have  done eleven stories together with the help of google docs. Each pair have started with a story and other pairs have continued with the story doing a paragraph.  If you want to see the original google document click here.



   
                                       THE PERFECT MURDER     

      Every thing began when Mr. Smith married with Ms. Robinson, a woman with a very good position. In the beginning they were really in love, they never argued. But Mr. Smith began to get obsessed, every day he spent a lot of money and he wanted to have more and more money. Like his wife had a lot of money he started to plan a murder to take all the money away from her.

       When Mr. Smith was young, he had loved money, but nobody thought that he was going to do a thing like this. He started to plan to kill his wife and finally he planned to contract a mercenary to kill her. Mr. Smith would let him alone in the house and suddenly the mercenary would appear to kill Ms. Robinson.



     The mercenary went to the house when Ms. Robinson was alone. He hid in the kitchen waiting for her to come. Suddenly he heard a noise, he turned around and he saw a big dog. The dog started to bark and he bit him. Ms. Robinson heard the noise and phoned the police. The mercenary ran away scared with his broken trousers.

      The police drove the car fastly and then he went behind the mercenary. The police ran over the mercenary and he died. Suddenly he had an accident with a truck. Ms. Robinson was alive but also frightened, she couldn’t understand what had happened so she decided to phone her husband.


      She didn’t know that the responsable of all that was her husband and she told him everything. Mr. Smith said her that she should calm because he was going to do anything to protect her, but Ms. Robinson realized that he didn’t do anything to help her and because of this she started investigating.


      While Mr. Smith was out of house
she started founding clues. Firstly she found one paper in the bedside table, that it put a plan to kill a one person but she didn't know who. Then she start reading the plan and in the end of the plan she saw two initials M.R.       

     When she saw that the plan was invented of her husband she decided to go out of the town. She went to New York because it had family there. Before to go to New York she put a complaint to her husband. Her family helped him to assimilate all this. After, one year she knew that Mr. Smith was arrested by the police.

     She was very happy because  she got all that she wanted, forever separated from her husband and not seeing him anymore. But now, she felt alone, that is to say, with no one to love. So she  began to go out at night with her new friends. But one night, about 2:30 something terrible happened:they left her speechless.


     She had dinner in the house of Tailor, one of the new friends, and she was walking to her house when she saw a man behind her. She turned and she realized that he seemed to her husband. Ms. Robinson started to run like a mad. The man caught her and he cover her mouth, but she saw his face. He was her husband.



     Ms Robinson was a very strong woman, so when her husband covers her mouth she started talking with him:


-Why do you want to kill me? And she started crying

     She looked at him and she punched him in the leg. He fell to the ground and she started running for help.

     She went to the police station and she told to the police all that happened. The police started investigating and they found Mr. Smith burning the house of Ms. Robinson. They caught and arrested him. From that moment Mr. Robinson lives happily.


                            

                                              THE END